symposium
The panel I attended included presentations on Fall of Constantinople in 1453, Soviet army officers during the 1930s and Frederick the Great’s role in the Seven Years War. Although, I found the content of the other two presentations to be more interesting, the presentation on corrupt in the Soviet army officers was the superior presentation. Although, the girl who presented this jumped straight into her topic without a significant introduction, the presentation was organized and very well put together. She clearly presented her thesis, her hypothesis, main points of argument, background infomation and her primary sources. I particualarly enjoyed her conclusion of the selfishess of the army officers reflected capitalism more then the communist ideals that the Soviet Union is sopposed to live by. A member of the audience argued that selfishness of the army officers was due to self preservation rather then personal greed. Although, I believe he had a point because of the famous purges Stalin commited against his own people, but people often do use their position of power for selfish purposes. Self preservation is always critical when you live in an environment like Stalin’s Soviet Union, however it does not explain why officers were using their positions as stepping stones to power and leadership in the Soviet Union. Stalin’s closest advisors were often among those who were killed in the purges, so leadership in the Communist Party did not necessarily insure survival.
She also discussed the diaries and memoirs of the Soviet Union (her primary sources) thoughout her presentation, referring to them thoughout the outlining of her arguements. I believe the quotes and constant refererences to diaries/memoirs made the presentation because it made her arguements more legitmate and made the presentation itself more interesting. The only recommendations I would of made for her presentation were the development of an introduction and the delivery. The speaker spoke much too quickly and that took away from her presentation. If she had tone a better job controlling the tone of her presentation, it would have been near perfect.
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